Ok People,

I have for a while watched as others ask for critique about there ports,so I guess its my turn, so please be honest as I wont take offence, its just nice to know your thoughts.

Many Thanks

Kind Regards

Paul.


You Can't Depend On Your Eyes, If Your Imagination Is Out Of Focus!

I guess my port might not warrant looking at....



You Can't Depend On Your Eyes, If Your Imagination Is Out Of Focus!

Hi Paul,

Your portfolio has some nice work in it, nothing jaw dropping in my opinon and overall a bit lack lustre. I'm sorry if that sounds a bit harsh, I'm just trying to be honest. My favourite image of yours by far is your main image, the model looks great, I like how it's been cropped, some good colours and I like the overall composition.

I'm not so keen on the border effect used in 88424 and the selective colour in 83450 but that's just down to personal taste.

The ones of the three girls together I'm not sure if they really work, if its pictures that a customer has paid for of them and their mates then fine, but for a modelling site I am just not sure that they quite work, having said that I love the girl in the black and white shot, it's a shame you didn't have any more like that of just the one girl.

I think it's a good portfolio with your stated level of experience and although I'm not an expert the pictures do not look technically bad. I reckon you just need to work with some high standard models and MUA if possible and really think out the shoots beforehand, so you know what you want to achieve and perhaps get some more images of your favourite genre so you can build on that.

I hope that helps in some way


Yasmin

Yasmin Stone , Model  posted on 22/08/2010 19:10:17   Posted 425 times

Located:Bristol,Avon, UK
Member Since: 19/09/2008

Thank you Yasmin,

No offense taken as you have done what I requested, and I am very much appreciative of your comments and thoughts, and thank you for taking the time to do so, I know I have such a long way to go yet, I guess sometimes I look for comments just so I gauge if what Im doing is semi ok.

Kind Regards

Paul.


You Can't Depend On Your Eyes, If Your Imagination Is Out Of Focus!