Hey Peeps

Can you please give me advice on how i can better my portfolio/profile.

P x

Hi there,

My opinion is that your portfolio doesn't reflect your levels.  If you work to topless/nude then it makes sense to have a shot showing each style so people can make an informed decision.



Similarly, I would include a plain headshot, minus heavy processing.



Finally, the long comment about chaperones is, for me at least, mildly offensive as it seems to suggest that, were I to photograph you, I somehow pose a threat to you.  I don't.



Cheers



Jeremy

Quoting post from kruse
Hi there,

My opinion is that your portfolio doesn't reflect your levels.  If you work to topless/nude then it makes sense to have a shot showing each style so people can make an informed decision.



Similarly, I would include a plain headshot, minus heavy processing.



Finally, the long comment about chaperones is, for me at least, mildly offensive as it seems to suggest that, were I to photograph you, I somehow pose a threat to you.  I don't.



Cheers



Jeremy

I think Jeremy has summed it up quiet well and I agree with him in regards to showing your range of style.
Or in plain words topless.

As the op has stated in her note ' lot of wiered people out there'.

It's not them you have to worry about as there probabaly eccentric artists it's the Hannibal Lecter's that you have to worry about.

Quoting post from kruse
Hi there,

My opinion is that your portfolio doesn't reflect your levels.  If you work to topless/nude then it makes sense to have a shot showing each style so people can make an informed decision.



Similarly, I would include a plain headshot, minus heavy processing.



Finally, the long comment about chaperones is, for me at least, mildly offensive as it seems to suggest that, were I to photograph you, I somehow pose a threat to you.  I don't.



Cheers



Jeremy

Hi
I totally agree with Jeremy regarding you lack of presentation of styles that you offer to photographers.!!

If I was looking for an attractive model such as yourself for a topless shoot I would put you aside, as I wouldn't spend the time or would I have the inclination to write asking if you have any topless shots that you could send me..!!

TonyT

Hey thanks so mcuh for your advise, i've changed it all around a bit and changed pictures. Please take a look and let me know what you think? Would any of you work with me??

P x

Definitely better than before.  You might want to detail the tattoos, particularly if they are not clear from your pictures.

I see you have dropped the reference to the chaperone.  Trouble is, if chaperones are a must for you then it probably is best to mention that on your profile so that photographers who don't entertain them do not waste their time or yours in opening up a dialogue.



Something simple (without going into your reasons for why you want one) would be sensible.



Jeremy

Quoting post from MissPenelopyC
Hey thanks so mcuh for your advise, i've changed it all around a bit and changed pictures. Please take a look and let me know what you think? Would any of you work with me??

P x

Wow Miss P....!!!!

That's soo much better...!!  We can now see fully how stunning you are..!!

TonyT

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Wow Miss P....!!!!

That's soo much better...!!  We can now see fully how stunning you are..!!

TonyT

:) thanks tony!!! Your comment has made my day. I have doubted my abilities as a model for a few minutes!! :D x

Quoting post from MissPenelopyC
Hey Peeps

Can you please give me advice on how i can better my portfolio/profile.

P x

Put some shots by me in it 
Just kidding its a great start, i'm sure you will do well

Quoting post from ChrisRiccio

Put some shots by me in it 
Just kidding its a great start, i'm sure you will do well

Inbox me as i do like your work. your quiet far out but we could maybe arrange something Px

I got an idea! lets all shoot ms penelopy and whoever photo end up as her main port photo wins??

What we win :D  I'm moving back to Brighton soon, hoping to be much more local to a lot more models

Now thats a great idea, a group tf shoot either location or shared studio time somewhere??? :)

Chris i just got your email but ran out of mail on here. my email ad is mongtely@****.co.uk
please email me on there and i will get back to you asap :)x

lol we win an ego boost lol
I don't do group shoots though..I ask for a day for my shoot...then it's fair play..we all deserve our own shoots if you're to get good photos.

Me neither, bun fights an baps and flaps brigade :D

lol its not a circus

haha defo no circus guys!! And flaps...uurrgg no haha! Ali i will call you tomorrow about what we spoke about as i ran out of messages :(

this is getting serious and the stakes are high..it's our reputation on the line here lol
Chris if I pay you would you stay where you are please?
p.s
if you needed to email me in the future you can use this ***..but yeah we'll talk tomorrow

£3 and you have a deal :D